dsc_8957-4Here are two treatments of the same subject; I haven’t decided which I like better:

Haiku #1
in creeps frosted light
December’s dark mist no more –
the pagan wheel turns

Haiku #2
a frigid day dawns
months yet before the warming –
the turn of the year

“Haikus for January” © 2017 Valerie Barrett. All rights reserved.

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